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Cement Block Poem

December 2, 2007

The was my entry in the Cement Block contest.

Cement Block

Am I really doing this? Enter my mind. Will I live through this? Enter my mind.

Alone with my thoughts, I ponder my fate. If fear and doubt take over, I'll be crushed by the weight. The tomb I'm in is cold, hard, and real, But I am strong and prepared for the ordeal.

Am I really doing this? Enter my mind. Will I live through this? Enter my mind.

The hours pass slowly. My body grows weak. I'm deprived of food and adequate sleep. There it is again. I'm losing my connection. No! I'm Criss Angel! I must fight the confliction.

Am I really doing this? Enter my mind. Will I live through this? Enter my mind.

It's almost over. It's time for my escape! I want to hear the crowd cheering. I cannot wait! My mind, body, and spirit have pulled me through again. Working together, the fear did not enter in.

I have really done this! Enter my mind. I have lived through this! Enter my mind.

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    • Photo of Willturner Willturner
      Willturner
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      If life gives you lemons, make lemonade, then find someone who's life is giving them vodka, and have a party.
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      12/05/08
      Posted 1 year ago by Willturner

      that was the best poem I have EVER read!!!!

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      MAGGIEMOO
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      Met Criss Again!!!!!
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      Posted 2 years ago by MAGGIEMOO

      Hey Kathy, Just read your poem. That was awesome. I hope that Criss sees this, I bet he would be impressed. You can tell you put a lot of effort into coming up with that. Loyal Forever Debbie