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TRAITOR'S DISGUISE

August 10, 2008

POEM I WROTE

Like a blackened rose, once blood red, filled with vibrant life,

Dwindling, drying, dying…

Your words drain my once preciously held beliefs.

Like a permanent frown, once effortlessly showing its dazzling white teeth,

Saddened, depressed, alone…

I am thrown into a torrent wind that takes my conscience away.

Just like what I used to be, yearning, craving the sounds, that soothed my troubled soul,

Begging, sobbing, aching…

Well I plead you to take a second look at all you thought was good!

Loudly in the chamber of my angry thoughts you still reside,

Did you think I would forget those words, those ugly, tainted shackles…?

Why haven't you succumbed to all that I know you will become,

You are just wickedly sucking the very life from this newfound kingdom,

You don't belong here with your sleazy, half-witted cocky remarks.

All the sparkling life promises to be tainted with your demise,

But that consequence is something I can bear,

I just know you will not fare so well in the land where the grass is always greener.

For now, I hold onto the clasp which secures my tender heart,

In its fitful yet proper place,

And I pray….

I pray for freedom,

From the strife you have bestowed upon me,

And freedom from the memory of your disgusting disguise.

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      Posted 1 year ago by mayeea

      hi u welcome any time lol....love for criss

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      Posted 1 year ago by mayeea

      hi i think that is a good idea that you making a scrapbook for criss and by the way that is avery great poem i think you should be a Writer and i want to thank you for stopping by .. love to have you as afriend ..love for criss

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      Posted 1 year ago by MsMerlina

      Hey that's a cool poem! Before I opened the link I thought ' oh here's probably another sucky poem' because so many people have no idea how to write. Actually I'm really impressed with it. I've written poems and now I'm working on a book, not poems. Hopefully this time I'll find a publisher. Where in the interior of B.C. are you? Thanks for the comment on my page.

      Lou

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      Posted 1 year ago by Chani

      Hey gorgeous girl! I love the words you have chosen to describe your emotions, they are so real and I feel like you've been through a bad time. I hope that this was your way of dismissing those feelings and that you can move on and past it. You seem like a really genuine, upbeat person and I don't want anyone to make you you feel this way for long! You so do not deserve that! Loyal love xx